My Love, ~feedback plz~

My Love
My love for u will neva really go away
cuz u were the 1st boyfriend that I had
i will always remember those fun days, that days that made me glad
to have found a boy so special just with my 1st try
if i could, i would try and be with u forever, i tell u no lies
every time i would think about u,
i want to see u right then and there
but i couldn't see u until 7th pd at the end of the day
and we both know that wasn't fair.
our love was kept on the down low,
my parents could not know
i can't date till im 16, i told u that b4 we started
i don't think u really listen because u called me when u werent supposed to.
Well, now our days r close to done
at our own crossroads we must part.
but i will still care for u as much as i did the 1st day our relationship started.
i will neva forget u and i hope u will do the same.
its gonna be hard walkin down the road by myself, its really such a shame
that we had to say good bye to each other.
cuz i still think of u as my baby boy, as my lover.
till the day we officially part, my heart will always speak ur name.
why is this thing called love so hard and why do ppl call it a game??
cuz, to me love is no just somethin u do for fun.
love, to me, involves finding that special someone
i believe u and me could have made it, if u didn't have to go
if we would have made for sure, we will never truely know.
im thinking of u as i write this and i mean every word I say
even though lately i know i haven't been acting like ur girl
but deep down inside of me, u still r my world.
u held me and kissed me, when i cried at the dance
the one when i said, i don't want u to go
maybe we'll get a second chance
to start our love again, but for now we must end.
i will miss, no matter what anyone says.
my love for u will neva really change; it will never really leave.
hopefully when we say our final goodbyes, neither of us will never really grieve.
it will only make me sadder, to see u upset.
i have never seen u cry, but if i do, it'll be somethin i cant forget.
i love u baby boy and don't u forget it.
i'll never forget that u were the 1st person that said it.

Tell me what u think. ~True Story~ in case ur wonderin. it went down somethin like this.(actually its still goin on) At one point i think i got carried away lol thats why its so long

I'm glad you found love, sucks that life is complicating everything <_<

Bit more of a story sometimes then poem, but it really helps us get to know you. Good job ;)

thanx

Good work. As Zad said, it was kind of a story. I like it.

XD

Someone needs sleep o.O

*Hope things work out shorty ...

Hah, sorry...you said that, not Zad...

i think its cleared up by now sourz thanx
thank u 2 fire

You're wlecome.