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Winter
Week One


Out And About:
Dead Wood is - well - dead right now. Nothing and nobody of interest at all. Belle Forest remains still as the grave [although a very pretty grave, until nightfall]. The Nouveau Grounds seem to be the place to be at the moment, as Ametenchet, his lovely daughter Amen, and their Centaur herd are the most lively things in the whole of The Haven.
Latest News:
Poira and Amen are about to have their race interrupted by a rather PO'd Ametenchet.

Who's Where:
Nouveau Grounds: Ametenchet, Amenareis, Clicker Von Parté, Poira.




 

 Myrskt, Leader of the Yulomin Revolution
Azrael
Posted: Jan 28 2006, 03:53 PM


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Seeing as there is a lot of story work to be done around Myrskt, this is like...a prototype form.

Spell and Grammar Check - Not as in spell check, but just to check the context and all that.

Anima-Bebedor's Name: Myrskt

Age: I'll need the history for that.

Family: Ditto.

Clan: The Yulomin Revolution

Clan Rank: Leader

Appearance: Tall, for an Anima-Bebedor; dark hair, silver/blue streaks; very handsome; deep purple eyes (is that alright, or must he have red?); I'll do the rest later.

Personality: Authoritative; intelligent; ruthless when necessary; like I said, I'll get back to you on the rest.

Other: Um...
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Skittlez
Posted: Jan 28 2006, 04:04 PM


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Right, when you've got the history, can you please expand on these points? Put them into paragraph form. For example;

Authoritative; intelligent; ruthless when necessary

becomes

Myrskt is a deeply intelligent creature, and often feels the need to assert his power over the others. This comes from his traumatized childhood, and the constant warring with his sister. His intelligence is somewhat frightening, especially as it includes both book-smarts and street-smarts. Well, he has to be street-smart, really, living in a desert. Deep down, he's really a decent person, but the fighting he has endured previously, and the hardships that he faces as an Anima-Bebedor Clan Leader have beat this down.

He is an extremely able and suited leader, although he is somewhat volatile if you piss him off enough. When necessary, he can have all the mercy of Satan himself, and will do whatever is necessary to further the lives of his clan members.

I know you'd probably do it anyway, I'm just clarifying for you. (:
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Azrael
Posted: Jan 28 2006, 04:05 PM


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Yah. I would have, but thanks anyway.
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Skittlez
Posted: Jan 28 2006, 04:16 PM


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No problem.
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Azrael
Posted: Jan 28 2006, 08:01 PM


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Meh. laugh.gif
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