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Dragoon N. Noguard
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General Information Full Name: Dragoonsnake Neal Noguard Nickname(s): Neal
Title(s): Dragoon Alter Ego: Neal
Date of Birth: April 24th 1970 Birthplace: Deimos, one of Mars' moons Residence: Planet Earth, Hercule City
Species: Hybrid (Human/Saiyan) Gender: Male Age: 22
Dominant Hand: Right Allergies: N/A
Marital Status: Single Economic Class: N/A
Friends: N/A Friendly Rivals: N/A Enemies: N/A Known Relatives’: N/A Occupation: Bounty Hunter Languages: English Religion: N/A Clan: N/A IQ: somewhere around 200 AppearanceDescription:
The many outfits of Dragoon: (Posted Image)
Height: 6'
Hair Color: Black Eye Color: Black Tail: Long monkey tail, usually wrapped like a belt.
Saiyan Attire: (1C) Green skin tight leotard. Saiyan armour; left shoulder plate. Earth Attire: Black Gi, blue undergarmets, white headband. Personal InformationPersonality: Dragoon isn't one to be messed with. Though he doesn't like to intimidate others, he will if he sees it necessary. He's the good guy. The hero. The one with all the fun in life. Though, usually he ends up with what he wants, no one having much over him. He's pretty light-hearted, and enjoys to have a good laugh every once in a while.
Social Class: All Sexuality: Heterosexual Alignment: Good
Goals: Because he has none, he just watches over earth, protecting it. Likes: Sparring, Training, Creating new moves/techniques. Dislikes: Bullies, Thieves, Criminals in general. Fears: Immensive evil
Attitude towards Life/Death:
-Self: Not afraid. He stands up for what's right, and will die to prove that he has a good heart.
-Family/Friends: He puts his family and friends above himself, and would do anything to protect them, even if it means risking his own life.
-Rivals: He sees rivals as friends, and would do everything in his power to protect them, if they indeed need protection.
-Enemies: Dragoon is light-hearted. He enjoys having someone to fight against, and would only kill them if absolutely necessary. Otherwise, he'd spare anyone who crossed him.
-Strangers: Dragoon doesn't feel so intense about strangers, but would protect anyone if possible.
Attitude toward Money/Power: Dragoon has no feelings towards money. He believe it corrupts people. Power, however is something completly in it's own. Strength, Heart, Friends, everything is considered power, but it is all different, and he feels differently amoung it all. Attitude toward Work: Depending on what 'work' is, he usually tries to complete anything he can, as fast as he can. Attitude toward Fighting: Dragoon loves a good fight. Usually, he tries to keep it long and fun, and tries to hold himself back so he won't cause harm to anyone, especially himself. Attitude toward Anger/Forgiveness: Dragoon is angered easily, and doesn't hesitate to stop whoever it is that's causing it. He can forgive almost anyone when he's not angry.
Gourmet of choice: Hot Cheetos Beverage(s) of choice: Pepsi Favorite color(s): Snow White Hobbies: Sparring/Training
Quote: " Theme Song: Grow Up > Simple Plan Fighting InformationItems: Aqua Ring Weapon: N/A
Classification of abilities: Ki, the energy from within. Attribute: Air - Evasive Type: A person who can dodge any move and recover from any blow quickly. Basic Fighting Style: Dragoon fights intensely close and then strikes from afar with ki when he can most surpise the enemy. Top Speed: Faster than a fighter jet.
Advantages:
Agility – Dragoon can easily move or jump quickly (Normal/Ki)
Speed - Dragoon can catch a bundle of speeding bullets all at once (Saiyan)
Endurance – He is hard to take down. (Saiyan)
Strength - Dragoon can lift twenty-fourty times more than the strongest human (Saiyan)
Smart - Dragoon can easily think up battle plans, or make up decisions when needed (Normal)
Flight – Dragoon can push his ki in any direction to change his speed, or levitate in the air (Ki)
Teleportation – By concentrating, Dragoon can teleport anywhere in a certain direction, or to a familiar place he's been as long as he knows how far away it is (Ki)
Weaknesses:
-Dragoon has not overcome the weakness of his tail. Just squeezing it can take him down easily. If you can grab it in the first place, let alone figure out that it is his weakness
-His family/friends are important to him, aswell as civilians. If you threaten anyone innocent, he'll be angered to stop you
Powers:
*Ki - Dragoon can use his ki to do almost anything. He can form it from any part of his body, and then send it anywhere he wants. He can also transfer it to someone else to strengthen them [Ki]
Ultimate attacks:
Dragon Barrage - Dragoon pumbles the opponent into the ground, teleporting wildly around him as he does so. Usually followed by Dragon Bomb
Spirit Bomb - Dragoon lends power from everything alive around him, (can go to the entire universe if needed) and then concentrates it into a small ball that can be thrown or absorbed into a fist of ki
Dragon Bomb - An alternative to the Spirit Bomb, where only Dragoon's ki is used
Dragon Dynomite - An alternative to the Dragon Bomb, where Dragoon emerses himself in the ki, and then fires a beam from it
Fire-Bullet - Dragoon fires multiple shots of ki, golfball-sized.Mini-BiographyDragoon was born on one of Mars' moons, causing his mother's death just by tearing his way out of her stomach. His father had to calm him down, and later, even that proved to his end. Just as Goku had, Dragoon fell off of the moon, and hit his head on the surface of Mars. The extraordinary fall proved to turn his fate. Training there took a few years, and then he went to visit Vegeta with a spaceship he created and invented himself. Turns out that it was far more advanced than the one they had, so he was hired to create some more for him. Only after hearing of Goku's adventures did he think about visiting Earth. Another saiyan had the same idea, and came to enslave the human race and claim earth as his own, even renaming it after him. Of course, Dragoon stopped him and took the position of the unknown hero of Earth, just as Goku had been. Except no one had a clue what his name was, or where he lived.
((Short, Sweet, and to the point))
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Nice Profile. Though, you shouldn't interact with official characters.
The reason for this is:
Many people claim to have 'killed' Goku, Vegeta, etc. But you say that you are in fact, currently interacting with Goku, Vegeta, and etc. What are you going to do when you meet with that person? Your story will calapse and burn to ashes.
And the problem with being a saiyan is that Planet Vegeta; where all of the saiyans were. Except Goku, Vegeta, Nappa, Raditz and etc. That place was destroyed. And the only pure saiyans left are Goku and Vegeta. Also, all saiyans are evil. Goku was different because he bumped his head.
If your going to make your character a Good, Pure Saiyan. Then you must explain how he survived Frizas blow. What did he do then? And how did he become good?
But you said your character is a Human/Saiyan. Meaning he is a Half Saiyan. Like Gohan, Goten, Trunks and etc. The problem is. You would have to be son of one of the officials for this to work. But as I said earlier. Interacting with officials may bring future problems.
Your powers are acceptable since your character is indeed a Fan Made based on DBZ.
Edit: Th appearance of your character is ideal for a Saiyan. But he has no individuality. It looks like a recolour of Teen Gohan.
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Simplicity at work, i already figured that out. Except for the part of interacting with goku. i said "Only after hearing of Goku's adventures" i never interacted with him. In this case, here's what happens:
Long after the Z-fighters era, The saiyans are wished back alive with the namekian dragonballs, and new vegeta is reformed.
And saiyans aren't evil, they have a drive that makes them power-hungry. And i should probably change the history a bit because half-saiyans aren't as uncontrollable... Also, Dragoon is VERY Goku-like in personality. Somewhat different, and not as hungry or talkative/afraid of needles. Another thing i should probably add: The ring he wears is from the fountain of life, which is why his birth and age are messed up. As long as he wears the ring, his age is stopped at 20. If it is removed, he continues to age, but only after the effect of the ring wears off.
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| QUOTE | | Training there took a few years, and then he went to visit Vegeta with a spaceship he created and invented himself. |
You did interact with one of them. Unless you mean't 'New Vegeta' the planet. Am I correct?
| QUOTE | | As long as he wears the ring, his age is stopped at 20. If it is removed, he continues to age, but only after the effect of the ring wears off. |
The ring seems useless because Saiyans never age. Sure they become adults, but they stop somewhere around adulthood. I know this because in 'DragonBall Budokai Tenkaichi 3' in the encyclopedia. There is a Saiyan girl. If you click on the button that says 'Chichi's Opinion' (Something around those words.. don't remember). Chichi admits that she is jealous of the Saiyan Girl because they never age. Goku never aged, he stopped at one point. In the last episode of Dragonball GT. He looks a little different around the cheeks. But thats just because he got a little fat.
Sure I am using a game as referrence. But the game still keeps the DBZ reality. They don't change any facts.
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Actually there's a flaw in what you just said. They DO age, otherwise there'd be no need for children. They just age slower (after hitting adulthood) and don't become old so they can still fight. I think they normally live twice as long as humans.
And another thing, GT isn't considered lagit, because it wasn't created by the original author of DB and DBZ. And yes, i meant to put new vegeta.
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Well... I guess your profile is flawless. XD
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not flawless..... but meh, =P
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I wouldn't consider Sparring/Training as a 'Hobby'. Instead, does he play music? Play sports? Stuff like that.
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Nope, it's a hobby.. He likes to train in his spare time...
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