Zaidah

[Zaidah]

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Age: 15
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IC:

Name: Zaidah (zay-dah)

Gender: female

Age: 4 years

Alignment: (wuzzat?)

Family: Eris, Jade, Nova. Eris was a younger brother of Zaidah, one she did enjoy to be with. But she didn't know him her whole life, as you may know, becuase he is younger. Her original parents were Eris and Jade. She did love them, and she did enjoy there company, very much so. But then Eris, her father, died in a fight. A pride attempted to take over the lands. They did not secceed, but they took her father. After his death, her mother found another. That was Nova. Then they had a child,a nd named him after her first father.

Physical Description: Zaidah is more of a darker brown. Her nose is a healthy darker brown color. Below her nose it's a very bright brown, and a bit is even white. Around her eyes it looked like there is a dark brown. The rest of her face is pretty much a slightly darker brown, except the bottom of her cheeks are brighter. Zaidah's front paws are pretty much the same color running all the way down. It's a fairly dark brown color. She often has dirty paws, maybe from mud or from her last kill. Her ears are brown, a bit brighter inside, and the back gets darker as they near her neck. Her back has various browns, but there is a noticeable very dark brown line that runs down her back almost marking her spine. It goes to her tail, even all the way to the end, and th end of her brighter brown tail has a dark brown almost spot. Her back legs look almost like they have bright brown striped going along them. Then the rest of her legs are darker, but then get brighter near her paws as if there are striped going all around her leg above her paws. She has a strong, built up body, and she plans to keep it that way. (i put two paragraphs togehter, is that fine?)

Personality: Zaidah can be a bit of a witch. She doesn’t always care what others think about her either. If you don't like her, depending on how you usually act to her, she usually thinks it's an accomplishment. She isn't one to love, and doesn't love many. Zaidah can usually be really nasty. she won't understand, and will say to craziest, most rude things. She loves fights, she just loves to see fights. Especially when the fights are for her, but that has only happened once to her. Zaidah does not know how to treat cubs, she's so use to tormenting lions that she isn't so used to cubs. She will try to act nice. And she will succeed, but she often regrets what she has said. She usually does what she can to get mad at other lions. But if somehow you understand her, and if you ever listen, she will probably regret ever being so mean. She'll never apologize, though, it's not her to do that. Zaidah often hates when people are nice to her, yet at times she will accept it. She doesn’t always like to be known to be nice. She can be nice, but that would be an occasional time, and something she may only do to one or two others. She will often bare her teeth, and flaunt her sharp fangs. She never seems to be in a good mood, and if she id, almost anything seems to be able to break that.

Fighting is something she does well, and does often. She will have physical fights. Often she starts them or asks for them. Zaidah often gets a bit touchy, which is actually normal for her. She likes the ones like her more then those whom are too nice, too different hen her self. She isn't always too loyal, either, but can be when she wishes. Also, when Zaidah is determined, don't try to steer her otherwise. She will stifk with something and nothing else. If she had her mind set to something she will believe it is so, and if you mess with that, she may hate you for life. She's touchy, but not all the time.

History: When Zaidah was born, at first her parents thought she was a boy. It's not the most pleasant thing to have your parents think. They didn’t bother to do anything else, she was immediately a warrior. She went into warrior training, and they soon learned she was not a boy. They, of coarse, did not admit they were wrong and then continued to act as thought they thought she was a boy. She was tried as a warrior for the whole time she lived with her parents. Eris and Jade, they weren’t too bright, but they were defiantly loveable and kind. She enjoyed living with her parents. After the death of Eris, though, they were really depressed. He'd died because another pride attempted to enter and take over the lands and lions of the pride. They did not succeed, but they did manage to get one lion. Eris, her first father. Well, it didn't take long until her mother got another mate. Nova this time. There bond seemed stronger then the bond of her first parents.

Her brother was names Eris, after her first father. She didn’t want anything to remind her of her father, but apparently her mother did. So it had to be done. The family was perfect. Zaidah had one friend she hung out with, because when her father died she turned into that crabby Zaidah we all know today. Her friend was the only one who really knew how to calm her. She still loved her mother, but she slowly pulled away from her. One day her other took her inside their home.

"Your not a male"

She calmly told Zaidah.

"Like I haven't figured THAT out already"

That is when it seemed her mother got a bit more angry at Zaidah, and Zaidah a bit more angry at her mother. They had many talks, usually short ones because Zaidah was not one for talking. But in the end, it seemed Zaidah hated her mother. She left, just like that, no good byes, and defiantly no "I love you" s. And it seemed to end then and there.

Roleplay Example: The bodice of the femme gracefully ran along the waters edge. Her paws lifted and fell almost in a pattern, and almost in a rhythm. It would just seem perfect watching her run, something that would actually never bore you for a minute. She was hard to see through the trees, and hard to hear in the grass. The soft grass stuck between the toes in her paws, and as her paws lifted the grass wanted to follow. The wind pushed against her, but her strength only helped her push past it as if it was not there. She ran along the water, so close it looked she could fall in, yet so far it seemed she wouldn't. Her reflection could be seen through the trees as well, but again, just barely. The way she ran made it seem like the waters edge would never end, but it did.

And as it did it turned, it turned away from her, the direction she ran was no longer along the waters edge. Now she just ran along the hard ground in the forest, the trees getting a bit thinner and easier to see through. She finally ran out of the forest, you could hear her now, though. You could see her full body, and you could see the anger on her face. It was normal for her to look angry, it was normal for her to BE angry. She finally slowed down, and looked back in the soft dirt ground. She saw her claw marks, she dug her claws in the ground in every step. Zaidah sighed, lowering her head. She left, she left her mother. She was the worst mother in the world. And she left Nova, whom she felt she didn't even know. And she left Eris, he may have been the only one that she had left that would actually leave a mark. She missed him, a lot, a whole lot. But nothing could help her back home, now. Maybe she should have asked him to come with, maybe at least told him where she was going, she left her poor little brother.

Other Notes: um... I may not seem literate. it's caure I don't spend as much time on here, on the application. I like rping more!

Sample Post : I don't know if you'd consider this literate... so I will get a few then.

TItus turned to all the wolves as they spoke, careful to listen to everyword. First he was curious what femme they were taling of, and then looked to Zeyar. He knew she wasn't treating him with excellent respect, but she was a whelp, he could understand.

"Your forgiven"

Titus simply said to Nova, not wanting to speak quite yet. He eyed Kitanomaru, almost suspiciously. Kitanomaru didn't seem very appericiative of his pack so far. He paused, not talking to anyone for a second.

"She is Zeyar"

Titus spoke, hoping Nova was talking of his whelp. He eyed Nova angirly, and scowled a bit before returning his gaze to Zeyar.

"And your forgiven too"

Titus angirly snapped at Tayer. He scowled, gazing at her, to Adrian, and finally back at Zeyar. Titus growled at Adrian for the remark about Zeyar, but he stayed still. But at the remark from Nova. He growled, and then jumped to his feet right in front of him. His face was right in front of Nova's, and he bared his teeth. They shon in the newly come sunlight. It was dawn now, finally. He snapped angirly, so close to him.

"THIS IS MY DAUGHTER"

He pretty much roared.

"I CARE FOR HER, SHE'S YOUNG, SHE'S A WHELP. YOU DON'T SEEM EVEN HALF AS HIGH AS HER, ARE YOU? SHE IS THE ALPHA HEIR, AND YOU? YOU COULD END UP AS AN OMEGA! YOU THINK YOU HAVE THE RIGHT TO SAY THESE THINGS OF MY FAMILY?"

Titus's was so full of rage that flame seemed to lick up through them. It could just burn through you, and most wolf go back on their haunches and possibly beg to be forgiven. Yet from these two he definitly didn't expect it.






Rhone looked back and forht at the wolves, confused of what to say, and very quiet. He was confused, not quite sure what to say. About to talk to Cy[rus, when Togue came. Then about to talk to Zeyar, when suddenly she's talking to another. It was getting to confusing,a nd very annoying as well. A quiet growl emitted form his throat to show he was angry, and he eyed Cyprus as he and Togue left. Thank god, their gone. He thought.

"HEY"

Rhone yelled towards them.

"We can hear you, keep it down! If you don't say were here, we won't say you were here. You say where we've been, we'll say where you've been. And Cy[rus, don't become my enemy just yet, I'm in your pack apperantly."

Rhone thought angirly about them, trying not to say anything about the other whelp. Sure, she was beautiful, but after Zeyars comment he didn't care about them. Plus it seemed he already took her anyways, no matters. He looked appologeticly at Zeyar.

"I'm sorry"

He told her sadly, begining to talk away with her.

"I just got a bit angry, that's all. Sure, you may show me around. I'd like it. And, well- to be honest... I like you as well"

He said it so quietly he almost doubted she even heard it. He bit his lip for a while, a bit nervous. Then he realized one thing. He ran bck to grab the leaves and grasses and roots he'd brought to her before. Then he brought it to her. He grinned again with it in his mouth, trying not to taste the bitterness of the roots from the plant. He wnated so bad to put them down to heal her, but continued as long as she wished. He kept looking at her, into her deep opals. It was enough to make one mad. In them he thought he could see everyhting, like a magic crytal you could see the past and future. He thought he saw his mother, and then her death. He looked in the directions he would have been if RHone really did see his mother in her orbs. But no one stood there, no one.







Just a look, not any longer. I'm only- going to take- a look. Tayci thought. The slender bodice of the femme slowly padded around the field. She looked aroudn at everything. This was meant for fights, but she just wished to be here for a while. It was getting only darker, she could see stars now already. Tayci found rocks, and there was a way to stand almsot inside them. She walked inside the hollow rocks, and then sat down. It was more of a cave, and the moon light hit it jsut right so that the water inside glowed. She never thought anyhting like this would ever be found near the edge of a field. She thought it would be her own seceret cave. She wlaked inside, and she could hear water slowly trickling down rocks. She looked towards it, they glowed brighter then and crystals. It didn't lighten up much of the cave though.

Tayci walked inside, it was beautiful. She could hear the soft sound of the water trickling down the side, it smelled sweet as if there was lilacs growing within the cave, and it was nice and cool. She loved it in here. She smiled, and then sat down facing the water. The water could be seen on her fur, it looked as though she was in the water. It looked as though the ripples form the water drops were on here, and her body looked clear and bright blue, the color fo the water. it reflected ont he floor and on her self. She loked so beautiful.





Pagoda grinned a bit at the answer from Cyprus. But he was again jelouse of his catch. He looked around, doing the wildest and most stupidest thing a whelp could do. He slowly crept towards the herd of deer, insane eh?

Pagoda spotted a very young deer, which was limping in every dtep it took. He was almost right behind it, careful to avoid all stick that he could be heard on. Then he leapt as high as he could towards the deer. He hurled himself towards the back, trying to aim for it's neck. It was weird to see such a small animal trying to attack the weak fawn.

He threw his head down to grasp the deers neck, and then thre his claws int eh side to try to knock it over. But with no succees he held in to see the ground passing him as the wounded liming deer attempted to run away. The herd also ran, and pagoda dug deeper lifting his claws out of the deer, adn then throwing all his paws intot he side. The deer made him fly off, and he landed on the ground.

"OOMPH"

He was determined. He crept towards the deer, waiting for it to finally stop and try to reheal its self by getting it breath first. He again leapt towards it, and then again did as he had done before. He bit harder first and imiedietly threw his weight to the side as he dug his claws int eh weak deer. It finally fell, but kicked it's legs as much as it could. Pagoda jumped on it, and then for the last time bite it, and bit it good. FInally it stopped moving, and he tried to drag the fawn. it took a while, but he finally dropped it in font of Cyprus. He grinned yet again.





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[Settah]

Just start to make your paragraphs longer and more detailed. ^^