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mustang moon - July 11, 2006 07:24 PM (GMT)
I need a name for a book I'm doing, here (if it ever gets publushed) is what would be on the back cover:

My name is Chyanne.
I wander through the woods, finding my way home
I trust no one, not even the police.

its about a Girl that gets kidnapped and taken across the US she escapes and finds herself in Tennisee trying to get home with out getting caught.
I'm thinking 'I will Survive' but I don't know ideas???

mustang moon - July 12, 2006 07:56 PM (GMT)
I decied to post a little of what I got so far to give a better idea.

"Just wait in the Van" he said grabbing the damp cloth "it'll take just a minute."
Running in the shadows he reached the house, and the open window. he started to slowy pull of the screen and then slipped inside.

Two weeks it had been two weeks sence they kidnapped her.
they had crossed from Utah to Tennisee. they were headed to the Alantic.

She had always thought about ways to escape but never got the chance to try. the part that she couldn't get through were the ropes on her hands and feet there wasn't anything to cut the rope.
in three days we'll be on the Coast then its impossible to escape she thought I've got to- her thoughts were interuped by a bump in the road there was a sound too she thought looking around she was about to give up when she heard it again, by the wall seperating the cab from the back there was a shard of glass yes! she thought scooting over to it, turning her back and picking it up she tried to cut the rpoes.
after she got her hands untied she set to work on her feet grabbing one peice of rope and sawing it off. she was almost done when she felt the Van stop once she was free she crawled to the back door carfuly opening it trying not to let it squike and sliped through, closed it and snuck around the car behined it, not caring that the people were watching, she was free!
as she croughed behind the car she waited till the right moment to run.

Kopaka4004 - July 13, 2006 02:43 PM (GMT)
i need help with someting for a lego movie

mustang moon - July 13, 2006 03:07 PM (GMT)
do you have any ideas for it? (the lego movie)

Kopaka4004 - July 13, 2006 06:26 PM (GMT)
not yet

mustang moon - July 14, 2006 03:40 AM (GMT)
a story line?

Kopaka4004 - July 14, 2006 02:58 PM (GMT)
i need good peeps to help me writg the story!

mustang moon - July 14, 2006 04:33 PM (GMT)
hm...............do you want me to think on it?

Kopaka4004 - July 15, 2006 01:56 PM (GMT)
sure but pm me!

mustang moon - July 15, 2006 02:18 PM (GMT)
Alright

Kopaka4004 - July 15, 2006 03:47 PM (GMT)
okay

mustang moon - July 15, 2006 04:26 PM (GMT)
thinking........

Kopaka4004 - July 15, 2006 05:21 PM (GMT)
*sleeping

mustang moon - July 15, 2006 08:42 PM (GMT)
......................

Kopaka4004 - July 15, 2006 09:52 PM (GMT)
................................

mustang moon - July 16, 2006 03:49 AM (GMT)
still thinking.............

Kopaka4004 - July 17, 2006 01:36 PM (GMT)
man

mustang moon - July 17, 2006 08:52 PM (GMT)
this is hard :mellow:

Kopaka4004 - July 19, 2006 09:52 PM (GMT)
i'll help think

mustang moon - July 24, 2006 10:37 PM (GMT)
mabey you could do it about Sand Rails


Kopaka4004 - July 25, 2006 05:32 PM (GMT)
????????????

mustang moon - July 25, 2006 11:18 PM (GMT)
pic of Sand Rail (Dune Buggie):





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its my Dads.

Kopaka4004 - July 26, 2006 01:12 PM (GMT)
...........

mustang moon - July 26, 2006 05:24 PM (GMT)
what do ya think?

Kopaka4004 - July 26, 2006 06:00 PM (GMT)
good

mustang moon - July 26, 2006 07:29 PM (GMT)
cool

Kopaka4004 - August 5, 2006 03:49 PM (GMT)
yeah

Graeme The Heroic - August 5, 2006 05:15 PM (GMT)
I'm going to make a short film that makes no sence at all. At least, once I get my computer fixed.

mustang moon - August 5, 2006 06:52 PM (GMT)
it broke huh?

Graeme The Heroic - August 5, 2006 09:47 PM (GMT)
The screen has gone blank again! <_<

mustang moon - August 5, 2006 09:53 PM (GMT)
No fun!!!!!! <_<

Hey Greame, are you going to post on the RPG that we're doing?

Kopaka4004 - August 20, 2006 12:20 AM (GMT)
i don't know thet i well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

gloss_girl - April 5, 2007 02:31 PM (GMT)
lol




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