My Review

[yasuko_latexcat]

Hi, it's me. Just giving my kuddos to you about your work.

TOTS Pilot: I've read the one not posted on your Lulu store (your Yahoo group story storage I guess). It doesn't bother me to read the non-copyright-friendly stuff you've put in versions not used for official publishing. I've got attached to the characters right away.
<3

TOTS Asteroids/Noh: This story had a big dynamic for the problems Xu and Sarra faced in that story, I've had so much pity for them. Sarra's story is the funniest to read to my opinion.

TOTS Good deed: Wow! Like most of your stories I can actually imagine visually the actions happening in this one! I laughed at the various moments where future!Xu tries to get inside the bulding; the one where she hides in a bush remined me of a joke on Family Guy (Peter tries to sneek into a theater, with a bush, so he could see a R rated movie).

As for Pink Lemon, I've only read the first part up till now ^^;; (haven't much time back then). But I can say that what I've read from that was quite interesting. I've laughed hard at the moment where Lora used her ice powers for the first time.

[TourqeGlare]

Lol, cool.
I'm glad you enjoy.
Thanks for reviewing.

I think that the Noh face story could be written a
bit better, and Good Deed is excellent! IMO at least.

Pink Lemon is going to get darker after the forth story.
So far, not better, but I need to work on that.

Thanks again.