Bloody, another poem

[Angel_of_Shadow]

Another one of my poems and a fore warning my teacher (it was a homework assignment) said "its an bit dark" and "it evokes alot of emotions":


Bloody

The smell of blood fills the air,
There is no end to the battle which wages,
And all I can do is keep fighting,
This sword and these hands are stained with blood,
And yet all I can do is stain them more,
My blade seems to scream for more,
Yet my heart can bear no more,
The sight of death clouds my eyes,
I can’t escape this misery,
I feel so dead inside now,
I feel I belong on this battlefield,
Struck down like the others,
But all I can do is stand there and fight,
I must fight on, there is no alternative,
I must protect the ones I love even if it means my death,
A sudden darkness comes over me and I only hope its death,
But then I realize its only night and not the end,
I pray for death now on the battle field though it never seems to come,
The blood shed does not end,
And the smell of blood fills my head like a poison in my veins,
And yet I still fight on,
An endless bloody war.

[LadySubaru]

good job!!! Well i had already told you that but why not tell you again!!! I like the imagry you used because it gave me such strong feelings...

[Angel_of_Shadow]

Thanks for the comment, even though you already told me.