Abyss
Psycho
Posted: Jul 10 2008, 11:33 AM


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Abyss

Into the abyss
I have to do this
I take a step
I leave the rest

Its all gone
I’m giving up
This game is done
I took the plunge

I might not make it
No need to fake it
The end is coming
Lets start running

Together once more
Waiting on this shore
We left the world
And all we adore

Its so close
It found us somehow
We cant turn back now

By: Me
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Demon_skeith
Posted: Jul 14 2008, 02:21 PM


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very nice. your poems are pretty good.
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Nemo
Posted: Jul 14 2008, 02:52 PM


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Epic. I think it could be a great song if the lines were a little longer. xD
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Psycho
Posted: Jul 14 2008, 11:33 PM


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Thanks to both of you ^_^
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