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Haruhi: Master of Everything
Posted: Jun 1 2009, 09:56 AM


Master of EVERYTHING!


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http://writer.zoho.com/public/ipheion/Untitled3

Yeah. That's it. Hope you like it. Right now, it's just the first part of two or 3 parts.

And one extra one, I don't know if you guys have read it.

http://writer.zoho.com/public/ipheion/Tomo...de-Draft-Twelve


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Minnie: Rose of Wisteria
Posted: Jun 2 2009, 07:57 AM


Maria is my Hero~


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Koala, is your second one getting published?


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Hey, Say, Anime!

"I always wished to be accepted by my surroundings and to change myself for that reason.
But... I don't care if I'm disliked...
I don't care if I don't have a place where I belong...
I don't mind if everyone rejects me starting tomorrow...
I will become a devil for the person who is trying to protect me."
-Maria Kawai, Akuma to Love Song
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Haruhi: Master of Everything
Posted: Jun 3 2009, 08:40 AM


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Published? I don't think so.


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Minnie: Rose of Wisteria
Posted: Jun 4 2009, 07:28 AM


Maria is my Hero~


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That sucks. They didn't reply or anything or say 'thank you but no'?


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Hey, Say, Anime!

"I always wished to be accepted by my surroundings and to change myself for that reason.
But... I don't care if I'm disliked...
I don't care if I don't have a place where I belong...
I don't mind if everyone rejects me starting tomorrow...
I will become a devil for the person who is trying to protect me."
-Maria Kawai, Akuma to Love Song
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Posted: Jun 5 2009, 05:29 AM


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It wasn't good enough. Nothing I could do about it. =P You should try submitting something.
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Haruhi: Master of Everything
Posted: Jun 5 2009, 05:38 AM


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Whoops. That was me. New laptop = no login info.


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Haruhi: Master of Everything
Posted: Jun 5 2009, 09:57 AM


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Uno mas.

Part 2. A continuation of part 1 (duh), which, BTW, is the first link, not the second.

http://writer.zoho.com/public/ipheion/Untitled4


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Taan: Wanderer of Nightmares
Posted: Jun 5 2009, 03:10 PM


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not bad, but I'd like it with more hatred and less defeatism. But that would ruin the mood.

Whatever. It was enjoyable, I guess.


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Katt: Duchess of Awesome
Posted: Jun 6 2009, 12:13 AM


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I think the narrator's spout of hatred in the middle of the second part was plenty. It came off strong, and kind of scary when you consider that that's probably the mindset of a lot of the people who do school shootings and such. Very real.

I like your style of writing a lot, Koala!


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Haruhi: Master of Everything
Posted: Jun 6 2009, 08:22 AM


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Thanks.

And, honestly, though, this isn't my normal style. Just as with my blog posts, I don't have a set style. The same goes with my writing. I'm still experimenting, and... well, I just felt compelled to write something like this.

Writing on a whim. According to Minnie, that doesn't work too well, but hey. At least my writing's getting done. Unlike normal.

As for the third part... (Yes, there's one more) It'll be different.

That's all I'm saying.


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Minnie: Rose of Wisteria
Posted: Jun 6 2009, 08:48 AM


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Hell, I've been writing for I don't know how many years now and I still don't have a set writing style. XD I'm just an excellent copycat of any writing style I can get my hands on. wink.gif

Anyways, I look forward to the third part. You're not going to make it happy-go-lucky are you?


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Hey, Say, Anime!

"I always wished to be accepted by my surroundings and to change myself for that reason.
But... I don't care if I'm disliked...
I don't care if I don't have a place where I belong...
I don't mind if everyone rejects me starting tomorrow...
I will become a devil for the person who is trying to protect me."
-Maria Kawai, Akuma to Love Song
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Taan: Wanderer of Nightmares
Posted: Jun 6 2009, 08:57 AM


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Rapid and incomprehensible style and personality flip ftw.


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Haruhi: Master of Everything
Posted: Jun 9 2009, 04:20 AM


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QUOTE (Minnie: Rose of Wisteria @ Jun 6 2009, 08:48 AM)
Hell, I've been writing for I don't know how many years now and I still don't have a set writing style. XD I'm just an excellent copycat of any writing style I can get my hands on. wink.gif

Anyways, I look forward to the third part. You're not going to make it happy-go-lucky are you?

I dunno ab out "happy-go-lucky", but it'll be different, that's for sure.


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Haruhi: Master of Everything
Posted: Jun 29 2009, 06:47 AM


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http://writer.zoho.com/public/ipheion/Untitled5

I was intending it to be different. It didn't end up being that much different. Not that I mind.
Read, please.


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Haruhi: Master of Everything
Posted: Jun 29 2009, 06:53 AM


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And if you haven't noticed yet, the story is still untitled.

YOU, yes, YOU, can help change that!

Gimeh names.


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