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not bad, but I'd like it with more hatred and less defeatism. But that would ruin the mood.
Whatever. It was enjoyable, I guess.
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I think the narrator's spout of hatred in the middle of the second part was plenty. It came off strong, and kind of scary when you consider that that's probably the mindset of a lot of the people who do school shootings and such. Very real.
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Thanks.
And, honestly, though, this isn't my normal style. Just as with my blog posts, I don't have a set style. The same goes with my writing. I'm still experimenting, and... well, I just felt compelled to write something like this.
Writing on a whim. According to Minnie, that doesn't work too well, but hey. At least my writing's getting done. Unlike normal.
As for the third part... (Yes, there's one more) It'll be different.
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Hell, I've been writing for I don't know how many years now and I still don't have a set writing style. XD I'm just an excellent copycat of any writing style I can get my hands on.
Anyways, I look forward to the third part. You're not going to make it happy-go-lucky are you?
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Rapid and incomprehensible style and personality flip ftw.
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QUOTE (Minnie: Rose of Wisteria @ Jun 6 2009, 08:48 AM)
Hell, I've been writing for I don't know how many years now and I still don't have a set writing style. XD I'm just an excellent copycat of any writing style I can get my hands on.
Anyways, I look forward to the third part. You're not going to make it happy-go-lucky are you?
I dunno ab out "happy-go-lucky", but it'll be different, that's for sure.