"I always wished to be accepted by my surroundings and to change myself for that reason. But... I don't care if I'm disliked... I don't care if I don't have a place where I belong... I don't mind if everyone rejects me starting tomorrow... I will become a devil for the person who is trying to protect me." -Maria Kawai, Akuma to Love Song
"I always wished to be accepted by my surroundings and to change myself for that reason. But... I don't care if I'm disliked... I don't care if I don't have a place where I belong... I don't mind if everyone rejects me starting tomorrow... I will become a devil for the person who is trying to protect me." -Maria Kawai, Akuma to Love Song
I think the narrator's spout of hatred in the middle of the second part was plenty. It came off strong, and kind of scary when you consider that that's probably the mindset of a lot of the people who do school shootings and such. Very real.
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Thanks.
And, honestly, though, this isn't my normal style. Just as with my blog posts, I don't have a set style. The same goes with my writing. I'm still experimenting, and... well, I just felt compelled to write something like this.
Writing on a whim. According to Minnie, that doesn't work too well, but hey. At least my writing's getting done. Unlike normal.
As for the third part... (Yes, there's one more) It'll be different.
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Hell, I've been writing for I don't know how many years now and I still don't have a set writing style. XD I'm just an excellent copycat of any writing style I can get my hands on.
Anyways, I look forward to the third part. You're not going to make it happy-go-lucky are you?
"I always wished to be accepted by my surroundings and to change myself for that reason. But... I don't care if I'm disliked... I don't care if I don't have a place where I belong... I don't mind if everyone rejects me starting tomorrow... I will become a devil for the person who is trying to protect me." -Maria Kawai, Akuma to Love Song
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QUOTE (Minnie: Rose of Wisteria @ Jun 6 2009, 08:48 AM)
Hell, I've been writing for I don't know how many years now and I still don't have a set writing style. XD I'm just an excellent copycat of any writing style I can get my hands on.
Anyways, I look forward to the third part. You're not going to make it happy-go-lucky are you?
I dunno ab out "happy-go-lucky", but it'll be different, that's for sure.