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Inspection =D| Wolf Mage |
Posted: Sep 27 2005, 09:07 PM
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((Being it's so obvious I'm a common werewolf roleplayer, here's an excerpt from one of my profiles, of Sarvantes, a werewolf who hasn't yet discovered his ability, hearing his mother scream while he is in the forest, and comes dashing in response.))
"The gentle trees around him now seemed to cruelly mock his attempts to return home, obscuring his path with gnarled roots and crooked branches. The darkness taunted and mocked him, griping his heart in fear. And as his fear grew, so did such a feeling he had never experienced before. His blood seemed to boil; transforming into steam within his very veins. His teeth began to grind insanely as he dashed ever-faster in the direction of the cabin, when the old-fashioned home came within eyesight, he noticed the door was slightly askew. Sarvantes’s heart pounded like a fierce drum within his chest, rattling and ramming against his ribcage as if trying to let itself loose. He felt his breath come in deep gasps…caustic gasps, like ones he had never experienced before. And yet he continued forth to the distress yell until he reached the very door. His hand nervously reached for the doorknob, his throat tight in fear of what he might see. He had never heard his mother scream; she was brave and confident, she’d never allow herself to do something so cowardly. But then, who’s voice could that have been, echoing through the trees and to his own ears? -------------------- "Before you criticize someone, walk a mile in his shoes. That way if he gets angry, he'll be a mile away and barefoot." - unknown
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| Stars9 |
Posted: Sep 27 2005, 09:45 PM
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werewolves...why does that soung like somone i know?....
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| Night Owl |
Posted: Sep 27 2005, 10:29 PM
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{Sounds like Erel! ^^
Anyways, I like it. Very nice.} |
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| Wolf Mage |
Posted: Sep 27 2005, 10:46 PM
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Thanks. The whole profile is...4 pages on word, size 12 font, for the history ONLY, I believe. Maybe 3 and 1/2...
Anywho, I usually include summaries at the end of my histories in case you don't feeling like reading a life-story. But I still have to make the profile for this site... -------------------- "Before you criticize someone, walk a mile in his shoes. That way if he gets angry, he'll be a mile away and barefoot." - unknown
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| TwilightQueen |
Posted: Sep 28 2005, 02:46 AM
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Wow. Delightful! Welcome to Gidaal!!
-------------------- "By believing passionately in something that still does not exist, we create it. The nonexistent is whatever we have not sufficiently desired."~Franz Kafka
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| Wolf Mage |
Posted: Sep 28 2005, 10:20 AM
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Thanks, I was going to post the part right after he opened the door, but where's the fun in that?
Let's see if you can guess what he saw, eh? -------------------- "Before you criticize someone, walk a mile in his shoes. That way if he gets angry, he'll be a mile away and barefoot." - unknown
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| Celtic Fairy |
Posted: Oct 10 2005, 02:43 AM
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Wow.... That's scary....
 -------------------- ~Listen to your Heartbeat and Dance.~
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