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 Eden Krieg, The New Guy
Eden
Posted: Jul 28 2009, 05:41 PM


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Name: Eden Krieg
Age:42
Body Age:42
Race:Human
Bloodline:Freeman
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Appearance:Eden is approximately 6'3'' and tries his best to maintain his lithe figure. Has dingy, greasy-looking, dark brunette locks that reach the small of his back. He usually ties it back in a basic ponytail. Eden bears a few unshaven whiskers that barely make up a five-o-clock shadow and is satisfied with such. He bears no scars save for a few scratches on his fingers. Eden's shoulders are a fraction larger than a teenagers, so from behind he looks effeminite. His eyes are a dull blue that appears unremarkable.

Equipment: Faded gray cotton pants that gently brush the earth. A loose-fitting, olive green shirt that has sleeves that extend six inches beyond the hands. Leather sandals that are well-polished from a daily twenty minute polish.

Personality:Eden has aged past his years, despite his "tender" age of fourty. He believes that he is not ever going to be the main character, or gallant hero in anybody's life, nor does he want to. Eden enjoys his role and envisions himself to be the advisor to the young and a teacher to those who need to be taught, not that he can teach much. Eden is more of a listener, thus giving him more time to ponder over subjects that relate to future actions. He tends to go over fictional battles in his head, mentally preparing in case he is needed. Eden has a secret desire to actually be a part in mischief and mayhem, especially pretending to be something he is not just to see how those around him will act when he changes. He enjoys masquerading as a saintly figurehead, someone with high morals and a calm disposition. Eden does this quite often, comfortable as something he is not, even though he truly does not know what he is. All he knows so far is that his likes seem to revolve around men and just making others smile.

Demeanor: Eden spends most of his time acting as though he is calm and gentle (after shaving and a good wash), using this guise to either get anything he needs or just to feel comfortable. When he doesn't bother to wear this mask, Eden is comically cynical and a decent man.

Skills:Acting and cross-dressing, and smiling.

Languages:Tirimian and a little Yurian

Background:Eden has spent most of his life romping through towns and staying for a few years or so. Each town he stay in, a new personality he makes. Eden has used many false names and histories, loving evry second of it.
He grew up in a small village that was very peaceful and quiet, too serene for his liking. Eden can stay in any one place till his death if he wanted to, but his desire to explore new lands, new faces, and new minds has carried him far from home.
Eden actually is searching for a new story, a new adventure, and he won't stop even if it kills him.


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Just because I have this insane desire to give you a big hug doesn't make me a bad man. I'm just...touchy feely. Yes, that's it. I'm clingy. WAIT! COME BACK! Where are you going?! The bathroom?.........can I come too?
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AdamTheMe
Posted: Sep 17 2009, 03:44 PM


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Well...

For the record, 6 feet is pretty tall for back then, just so you know. Not complaining.

Also, 40s is also considered old in that time, and you're likely closing in on your last decade of life. That shouldn't be an issue as far as your character dying soon, as time will pass fairly slowly, but you still have to factor in, that, well, that's old.

The rest seems fine, I guess (though I doubt many of the settler types would wear such well-kept sandals, more rough boots.)

Accepted, but you may wish to reconsider some things.


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I am me,
who else would I be?
... The Shadow Elf, Eildrimme, Collin

Thanks to http://www.canadiandragon.com/ for the avatar!
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