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| dragon658 |
Posted: Apr 29 2006, 08:53 AM
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Hmm an interesting chapter although there is still no attidutes to the characters in my opinion it kind of just rolls by. Also how has Will got so much money that he can afford attire (not that expensive) an elven sword (incredibly expensive) and a horse. By the end it kind of took some of the realism from the story. Perhaps the sword could have been a cheap old rusty one and the elven one been found later through some sideplot to the main story.
Overall another good chapter and I look forward to reading more -------------------- http://www.myspace.com/69559861
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