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 Hohenheim's story, Fills in blanks of Hawkeye's story
Hohenheim
Posted: Oct 27 2005, 12:18 AM


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Chapter 1: The Meteor Shower

Hohenheim had just gotten out of his egg, when he heard a loud crash. He looked for what the noise had come from, and found that a large meteor had crashed into the Earth. There was a large female dragon that was underneath the meteor. Suddenly, the crushed dragon started growing, and growing, until the dragon became '30' "5". The large dragon glared at Hohenheim, and stared at him menacingly.


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Hohenheim
Posted: Oct 27 2005, 12:27 AM


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Chapter 2: Missing, and gaining things

Hohenheim ran away as fast as he possibly could have from the mutated dragon. The dragon started chasing him, getting closer, and closer, until the dragon could grab him. The dragon did grab Hohenheim. The mutant ripped off his legs, and dropped him onto the ground. The mutant started choking, as if it couldn't breath the air on the Earth, and died. As if from nowhere, a dragon came from a glimmering light.
"Who are you?...." asked Hohenheim.
The dragon answered, "I am the divine dragon, but I can not tell you my name. I have come to here, to help you."
In a flash of light, Hohenheim gained metallic legs to replace the ones that were ripped off.
The divine dragon whispered into his ear, "I have also given you the power to re-construct matter... Use it wisely, as it takes extreme amounts of energy."

This post has been edited by Hohenheim on Nov 24 2005, 05:15 PM


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Hohenheim
Posted: Oct 27 2005, 02:48 AM


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Chapter 3: Meeting Winry

Suddenly, the dragon disappered in a flash of light.
Hohenheim thought to himself,"I must be stronger, if I want to be able to use this ability much."
He set out towards the volcano. (5 months later) On the way to the volcano, another dragon, that was female bumped into him into the air. The dragon's name was Winry. Both of them instantly fell in love. Hohenheim led Winry to his nest ,and they mated. Just after laying the egg, Hohenheim found a note attached to a tree.
It read, "REWARD for killing HOHENHEIM: 6 000 000."
On the back it said, "REWARD for killing WINRY: 5 000 000."
Hohenheim then decided to separate from Winry, and head to the volcano, leaving only marking on a rock that said, "I am going away to keep you safe, I am going to the volcano. By the way, name the daughter, "Hawkeye."

THE END OF THE PROLOUGE

This post has been edited by Hohenheim on Nov 24 2005, 05:14 PM


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Dracia
Posted: Nov 8 2005, 03:59 AM


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Very interesting. But just because Zetta used me in his story doesn't mean that you can do the same. He got premission. You didn't. No harm done, though. Just change it into another name, I'm a sea dragon, and you would have included that if you knew. Sorry, but just change the Divine Dragon's name.


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Cynthia
Posted: Nov 23 2005, 08:42 PM


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awsome story! keep on it wink.gif

((ill delete it for you))


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How can a young girl get the power to turn into a dragon? Why did it have to be me??? I cant control my powers either, but they come in handy sometimes, I guess...

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Hawkeye
Posted: Nov 24 2005, 05:13 PM


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Wow Hohenheim! This story is awesome! I can not believe you came up with that!


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I have met many nice humans in my life, but they all disappered without a trace... Ironically, you look very delicious tonight.
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Hohenheim
Posted: Nov 24 2005, 05:17 PM


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Sorry about that... I'm editing it, so I just did not give it a name. Someday though, I will give the Divine dragon a name. Probalbly, when the Eragon book seris is finished, and I get an idea for a dragon name. Lastly, once I get a name for the divine dragon, can my story, and Hawkeye's go on the site?

(P.S. It is not you Dracia... Well not anymore. Also, I did not name it mostly because it is hard to think up dragon names.)

This post has been edited by Hohenheim on Nov 24 2005, 10:11 PM


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Dracia
Posted: Nov 28 2005, 01:31 AM


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Thanks, I'll get around to that. Don't worry.


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