Resurrection

[Half Amazing]

ooc: I like to write poetry, although if you're looking for some sort of rhyme scheme and a particular meter (ex. iambic pentameter, etc.) then that's not me. Just to let you know...

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Resurrection

The light of dawn
stirs me from my intoxicated daze.
A daze so vivid and inthralling,
that it has wrapped my soul around its finger
and decided to make me pay.
Pay for all my malicious deeds,
all these sins that have made my blood turn opaque.
With a force so painfully swift and severe
that I am shattered like glass.
How wicked and vile this pain is,
blinded by darkness of the depths of my heart
is there no hand to hold me?
Reaching out with all my might
I grab nothing but air.
Is there no way to atone?
No way to climb out of this botomless hole?
It is as if I am drowning,
gasping for air as I surge downwards.
And then I suddenly wake....
This is my Resurrection.

[Nutz]

I like it. Not exactly my favorite poetry theme though. I tend to preffer more prosaic. It's nice though. And yes, I'm a profound appreciator of modern poetry and I like poems without rhymes and fixed metric.

[Raven Fyre]

It's pretty good. I'd to read some more of your work.

[Half Amazing]

Thanks for the comments and I will post some more works here. Glad you guys like reading em...

[Elf-chan]

This is very nice, and its well thought out when you wrote this. I hope to see more of your writing skills soon