People who usually need help with there roleplaying are people who just put actions into a post. I figured this out on Silent Calling. You have you wolf, and a bunch of vocabulary words, well, all some people use are the verbs.

In a roleplay, you should express feelings and discribe your history, not talking this out to another, of course. That would be an action. Say, when Shadow walked up onto a boulder, he felt the wind blowing in his face, then post something about his history if he was a pup, and he was standing on a boulder once. See how that kind of makes an interesting roleplay?

For some of you who think you can't roleplay, how about you post here with some of these following tips, I'm sure you will be impressed with your post, if not, I cannot gaurentee that you will be happy with all you posts, some will be short and others, longer. We want to keep this site at a good paragraph a post literacy, seven good senteces is what should complete a good paragraph.

• Keep on the lookout of each and everyone of your posts, like if you start to get off topic of one, then make a new paragraph that completes it.
• In a sentence, you can just put, 'She walked up there.' or 'She was confused.' To beef these up a bit, you can say, 'She walked into the light of the stepping stone, any carried her wieght across to her destination.' or 'Utterly in an ice cube, she squinted her eyes, and tilted her head to the east, and showed a face of frustration.', now I think thats a sentence.
• When you roleplay, when you first come apon lands, you don't just walk up to the alpha and bow your head, no! I've seen this happen on Aerian Forest. You make it sound like you came from the middle of nowhere! Say something like, 'He traveled across the border of what use to be of his fathers terra, he needed to find his own pack and blah blah blah.' Ok, or you can always use the 'She crawled out of the sea' method.